Peer Edit Jack Sullivan

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, there is.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, it does. He explains why there are so many cops.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
In ways yes it does.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, it catches my attention because Ive been wondering why there has been more cops.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes.